In Ruma Tahi, we were learning how to put only one thing into our writing and give lots of details. I found this quite hard because I kept wanting to write the whole story.
A Moment In Time
I could hear the plane firing up as we were walking to the plane. I could feel the hot carbon dioxide hitting me as I was stepping in the plane I was having second thoughts about this. I could feel the plane pulling me back on the set as the plane was lifting. Before I knew it we were 13,000 feet in the air I was feeling the tremendous amount of air coming through the door as he opened me and the person strapped to me jumped out first and did a flip. When we were free falling we were travelling 200km an hour you could only hear the gashing air going past your ears. At five thousand ft he pulled the parachute and he tried to show me were Mt Taranaki is and the North Island but it was to cloudy that day to see. When we were gliding down he showed me were the runway was were we took of in the plane we were coming down fast it was amazing to see the places that were there we come down for the landing and it was smooth.
