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Camp Thank You Letters - Term 4 2018

Camp Thank You Letters - Term 4 2018  Week 6

Task: Last week we had an amazing time on camp. We had some
great parents and Gemma, the APOEC Leader, who helped make
camp possible. We now need to take the time to thank these people and
write a thank you letter to them.

Key competencies/values: Respect, participating and contributing

Walt: write a letter to thank someone that includes recounting some of
your memorable moments at camp.

Success Criteria - What will our success criteria be? Co-constructed
with students.

• At the top you have your address and date.
• It needs to start with To (and who you are writing to)
• A paragraph thanking the person for what they have done.
• Three paragraphs recounting some key moments for you on camp.
• Think about what you enjoyed or learnt from camp and what you
• found challenging.  
• At the end, put who it is from (Kind Regards/ Ngā mihi/ Yours
• Sincerely)
• You might add a question or another personal comment at the end.
• Add some images from our photos.    

Link to letter template

Make your own copy to use and make sure it is in your writing folder.

Dragon eye

Last Thursday we made dragon eye out of card and dying it. Click here for a link to make one.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1oG7PPw697zZ4dSkLdvgjcGswhI8N9gNm

My Mihi

Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class, we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.

              Click here for a link to the original work.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aLEXxT05Zunwys-aIEIWXGmeeIJGkulOTsScsDL7ECQ/edit

The Back In Time Elevator

One day I was walking through town on the cracked and broken footpath.
I was going to have a look at the shopping mall. I had to go into the mall to
get in the elevator. The elevator was made out of glass so you could see out
of it. I was going up to the 23third story. Suddenly the elevator starts shaking
I yell out “HELP!” I crashed down onto my face it felt I got hit in the head with
a basketball.

I am somehow on a grass hill so I look up and say to my self that elevator must
have sent me back 66 million years ago look over there is a dozen of
brachiosaurus dinosaur. But over there look at those jagged rocks they look
they could be a castle I kept looking around and I see a mist. Up above the
mist, there are pterosaurs they're massive. You can hear the brachiosaurus
siping on the water. I heard the trees crashing down its a TREX run I run and
then I trip over and get knocked out when I wake up I am in the elevator and
that’s the story of the back in time elevator The End.